Re-did an old drawing from 2 months ago (When I taking drawing and tattooing as an actual passion)

[rip_design]

So... yea. Looking back at it "it ain't that good chief" is an understatement. But, I'm really proud on my progress - comes to show that with dedication you can power through everything.
The old one:

AAAAAAAAAnd the remake:

 

[Dzikichrzan]

I see some progress mate :d shouldnt it be: trust no one?

 

[dirtnail]

Nice progress but I must say I actually realy like the vibe of the original one...
Don't know but the original seems more creative and unique while the remake looks like something that tries to be traditional but is not. If that makes sense...

 

[Me16363]

The original is more original ??

 

[rip_design]

Nice progress but I must say I actually realy like the vibe of the original one...
Don't know but the original seems more creative and unique while the remake looks like something that tries to be traditional but is not. If that makes sense...

The original is more original ??

Fair enough, can't argue with that.

 

[pedr0g0mes]

looks good mate, i would probably just change the font type or spacing, might be just my crossed eye but it seems out of context

 

[rip_design]

looks good mate, i would probably just change the font type or spacing, might be just my crossed eye but it seems out of context

I feel ya. I have actually tried several different fonts but none of them seem to fit "perfectly" the actual piece. I'll try some more, lol
Thanks!

 

[rip_design]

Changed it a lil bit.

 

[MalligaMallan]

I like that, I don't think the scripts fits very well with the motif though I would want a font that differs more from the lines in the motif. Preferably bolder and cleaner.

 

[fylfot]

I think a traditional style font would look better.

 

[pedr0g0mes]

I'm no expert but looks very traditional , and much better than what you start with! The font I agree something bolder and whitin that style, but not that one definitely